Today we did a story about a volcano spitting lava,I like my story,And it was not hard to do.
Here it my story. Eruption
BOOM BOOM BOOM!
Goes the volcano,spitting out lava.Run everybody shouts!
There is a volcano erupting right in front of my eyes,Run for your life everybody shouts,as the lava is coming out of the volcano.
OW I say as I can smell smoke coming into my nose.now i'm covering my nose with my t shirt because it is so yuch the smell of smoke.The volcano sounds like a person yelling.The volcano is a mountain.All I can see is the huge volcano spitting out all of that lava.
I'm shaking in fair,what am I going to do on this island,I'm so scared.Crash goes all of the rocks and trees falling down,Pop goes the lava.What should I do?I know RRUUNN!
And now everyone is gone and the lava has stopped.
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