I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey readers
Today it was so fun because we got to make a thing about what we like, me and my friend did a gaming party it is a hole lot of games but I did Fortnite.It is a poster of alot of pitures it was so fun here it is.
Hey Tyler I think you did good on this gaming thing but in my opinion I think you shouldn't do fortnite back to the good stuff I think it was good to use pictures,mabey next you can use gifs and us emore words.bye
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Hey Tyler I think you did good on this gaming thing but in my opinion I think you shouldn't do fortnite back to the good stuff I think it was good to use pictures,mabey next you can use gifs and us emore words.bye
ReplyDeleteThx for the comment I will use all of those things if i remember on the next one thx.
ReplyDeleteHey kees Thx for the comment I will use those things in the next one if i can remember I did try do a gift but it din't move thx.
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