hey reader's
This week in writing we wrote a six sentence story about creating a character and adding detail. Our foucuse was on creating sentences. We learn that the four criteria of a sentences are.1.Dose it make sease. 2.Dose it have a flu stop and cap letter.3.Dose it have one idea.4.
I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like the way you disturber what you did at writing.
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