I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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This week I have been writing a describe writing I thing the most fun part was editing and the hardest thing was writing the story.it was fun have a look.here is the picture that we wrote about
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