6 story sentins:By Tyler

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This week in writing we wrote a six sentence story about creating a character and adding detail. Our foucuse was on creating sentences. We learn that the four criteria of a sentences are.1.Dose it make sease. 2.Dose it have a flu stop and cap letter.3.Dose it have one idea.4. 

My puppy drawing

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today for Cyber smart we learnt how to make an image from a piture in google drawing it was hard out lineing the pitue but it was fun to color it in.have a look. do you like it comment if you think i could change it.

Halswell quarry

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one day of school we went to the HALSWELL QUARRY!I made a story it was a moment in time. A moment in time is a story that is happning right now. here it is.

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I feeling energetic running up and down the hill top’s. Out in the sun, burning to a crisp.Hearing the trees swaying and the bush’s rattling.Itching in the long grass in the middle of nowhere.long lasting walks my legs are wobbling like a jelly.Sitting having a rest eating drinking good times.”Time for number two” “Huffing”,up to the hilltop we go. Getting harder and harder every map.

Finally we made it to the last map we walked and walked and walked but at the end we didn't find all of the sticks but we still had a good day the end.

Kindness

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today we writ about kindness.
It was fun we had to brain storm about kindness then share our idea's then we wot about kindness it was fun writing about it and the hard part was brain storting because it was in the morning.Here it is.      What  kindness is? by Tyler.R

Kindness is the world.

Kindness is the way to make people’s day.

If you be kind you will get a lot in life.

‘If you gift they mite gift back.

Kindness can make people have happy tears.

Kindness means you care for people.

You can show kindness in different ways.

Kindness is greeting others.

A little can be a lot.

Kindness can be a lot.

By Tyler.R

  

A moment in time

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This week I have been writing a describe writing I thing the most fun part was editing and the hardest thing was writing the story.it was fun have a look.here is the picture that we wrote about

Hockey

today we did Hockey a person named peter from Canterbury Hockey he thought us how to dribble stop the ball.it was so fun learning all of skills to have. we keep learning skills and at the end we played a game of Rob the nest where you got to get all the ball in your nest what is a hoop.we also learning to dodge other people.I found the game hard and found dribbling easy  and last l learnt is that if you us your feet the other team gets the ball.

Do you want to know about me?...

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in Cyber smart we have  been learning about shortcuts. this week we had to do a screenshot of our all about me and put it on my blog here is is hope you like it don,t forget to answer the question at the end and the most fun part was editing it so hope you enjoy it.