6 story sentins:By Tyler

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This week in writing we wrote a six sentence story about creating a character and adding detail. Our foucuse was on creating sentences. We learn that the four criteria of a sentences are.1.Dose it make sease. 2.Dose it have a flu stop and cap letter.3.Dose it have one idea.4. 

My puppy drawing

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today for Cyber smart we learnt how to make an image from a piture in google drawing it was hard out lineing the pitue but it was fun to color it in.have a look. do you like it comment if you think i could change it.

Halswell quarry

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one day of school we went to the HALSWELL QUARRY!I made a story it was a moment in time. A moment in time is a story that is happning right now. here it is.

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I feeling energetic running up and down the hill top’s. Out in the sun, burning to a crisp.Hearing the trees swaying and the bush’s rattling.Itching in the long grass in the middle of nowhere.long lasting walks my legs are wobbling like a jelly.Sitting having a rest eating drinking good times.”Time for number two” “Huffing”,up to the hilltop we go. Getting harder and harder every map.

Finally we made it to the last map we walked and walked and walked but at the end we didn't find all of the sticks but we still had a good day the end.